本次写作文，题目：电脑与我（要英文名）

评价：优、良、中、差

你几点起床啊??6点多??晕~~~~

把不好的提升!但是,你的资格应该做英语天使

啊!

"我不是给你了这个题目的文章了吗？能不能不写？"不行!

NO!不能用中文!除我公布消息!

哈哈!你什么时候写呢??把我们的资料说出去!

xiekexin

computer and I
Hello! I am a school girl.I have many friends!Some is boy.Some is girl.But my best friend is not boys or girls.It is a computer!My computer is black and big.I like it.It is my good coagent.It can lookup datum.It can piay games.I like it very much!Do you ilke it?

我的和给你写的差不多！我六点起床，是因为，我妈一天只让我上半小时，早晨时机最好！我平时5点就醒了！晚上8点睡觉！

I am computer. My name is “Samsung”. My body colour is black. I born in factory at the Kuala Lumpur.

这是第一段！（没时间写那么多！）

天啊?你们写得太短了!

我的!

I am a little girl, my family has a computer! It also very much likes it very much to my use Dawoer! it is the black, it might help me the family to be very busy! It may help my mother to inquire the stock material! helps my father to type, makes the document! Moreover also helps the good material which I inquire some to study, the question! I am bored may also play the game, relaxes! you said that the computer is very useful?

computer and I
Hello! I am a school girl.I have many friends!Some is boy.Some is girl.But my best friend is not boys or girls.It is a computer!

My computer is black and big.I like it.It is my good coagent.It can lookup datum.It can find pictures.It can listen to the music.It can see a movie.It can establish roomages.It can chitchat with all over the country company.It can write articles.It can also piay games.

I like it very much!Do you ilke it?

有点错误！请改正错误！

哈！

I am computer. My name is “Samsung”. My body colour is black. I born in factory at the Kuala Lumpur.

这个是有点错误！差

良